2nd Draft of my Film Opening

Stuff to change/edit from our first draft:

•Credits and typography

•Sound

•Shot improvements

•Editing

•Mise-en-scene

Though we had already created our title board, we didn’t have any other credits on shots in our opening. We used the same fonts and colours to add names into the first few shots.

We were advised to add more to the first few shots of the film. We have added more sound effects to the build up of sound ending in the lamp post crash.These include a heart beat, zombie, car alarm, footsteps and breathing sound effects which all help build the tension of the scene.

We were advised to add more to the first few shots of the film. We have added more sound effects to the build up of sound ending in the lamp post crash. These include a heart beat, zombie, car alarm, footsteps and breathing sound effects which all help build the tension of the scene.

To make the editing smoother as was suggested, we refilmed a shot of one of the zombies falling over and edited this in to our first draft. This made it much easier to follow and made The moment more impacting. 

To make the mise-en-scene more in keeping with the aesthetics of our two genres, we originally added zombie warning posters to the background. However, these were difficult to see in our first draft so we filmed more shots of them that made them clearer.